Oh, these are splendid! Please post them over at raythoo as well! So many great visuals in each of these! A few lines I must quote back:
tanned legs sliding over the sheets in blithe unconcern.
Yum. Just... yum.
Kate being frustrated about not being har? Perfect. And I do wish there were more stories set in Ferelithia. I loved writing my Aleeme/Azriel gapfiller and setting much of it there. What a beautiful, colorful place!
And then you wrote this: Seel, damp from the bath, would stalk from bureau to closet and back again; his wet hair coiling down his back like snakes, his eyes flashing like sharp-cut jewels as his irritation grew.
Gorgeous, stunning imagery. And inspiring, as well, since I'm writing a Seel-centric story as we speak! Thank you so much for sharing! Please do post them at raythoo as well to share your talents. :D
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tanned legs sliding over the sheets in blithe unconcern.
Yum. Just... yum.
Kate being frustrated about not being har? Perfect. And I do wish there were more stories set in Ferelithia. I loved writing my Aleeme/Azriel gapfiller and setting much of it there. What a beautiful, colorful place!
And then you wrote this: Seel, damp from the bath, would stalk from bureau to closet and back again; his wet hair coiling down his back like snakes, his eyes flashing like sharp-cut jewels as his irritation grew.
Gorgeous, stunning imagery. And inspiring, as well, since I'm writing a Seel-centric story as we speak! Thank you so much for sharing! Please do post them at raythoo as well to share your talents. :D